Should zoos exsist

Most people would agree that wild animals just came to the zoo are scared of human being. The fact is wild animals that just came into the zoo are scared of people. Because when they were in the wild there was no people in the jungle. And maybe people didn’t want to go in the jungle because they think it is haunted or they think there is a animal in it which they might be some animals in it. And if people come into the environment that the animal probably lives in it. Will probably get them injured. The problem why they might be injured because the animal have probably  panicked and got so scared and started attacking them.

In my opinion i disagree that animals shouldn’t be out in the wild because what happened if they don’t find any food,water and shelter. And what happened if there was natural disasters. That will be bad because they will die because they had know where to go  

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I believe that every kid should learn how to swim(agreeing).

Every Kid should learn how to swim?

My first reason is as they grow up having kids and one day they will be having a joyful swim around but suddenly their kid got too far to the sea and started to drown and what do you do? (thinking)what?.

Not knowing what to do because you can’t swim the reason why you never had learned a lesson how to swim, what would happen to you child?!.

To start with, most people will agree that kids should learn to swim while there young.

In my opinion kids should have the chance to swim and they should learn how to swim in a deep pool.

If the kid learn how to swim in a baby pool they will pretend to swim but the thing is that they were actually touching the ground.

I’m absolutely certain that every child in NZ should learn to swim. It is important to acknowledge that paying for swimming lessons can be very expensive, especially if there are more than 1 kid in each family. In light of this, the NZ school system requires students to learn to swim and this is usually free.

It would be worthwhile if every kid should join a swimming lesson so they can learn how to swim

Vaiola,Hiria.Ana,Maria